Thursday, August 9, 2007

Health Care - It is a Right

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Betty Liang
EWRT 1A
August 9, 2007
Final in-class essay

Health Care - It is a Right

Good health is fundamental to human life. If one does not have fame or fortune, one may still have health as a foundation to build a life on. However, in this money-driven day and age, access to adequate health care seems more like a privilege rather than a right. Having worked at a county hospital before, I have seen the pain and hopelessness of the uninsured who desperately need aid but are denied time and again due to financial reasons. It is imperative that those who have the means to reach out to the less fortunate of our population do so, as moral and caring members of society. I propose that this country institute universal health care so that everyone will have a right to see the doctor without having to worry about the financial burden. I challenge those who are willing to support this cause to stop going to Health Maintenance Organizations (HMO) to seek care and to write to those in power to advocate this change.
The sheer volume of uninsured people in this nation and the ineffective way in which our current health care system address this problem only creates a vicious cycle of hospitals shutting down and even more in need of urgent care. As of 2005, the number of uninsured people in American already exceeded 47 million, about 16 percent of our country’s population. Most of the people without health insurance live this way because they cannot afford to pay out of pocket, or they work at jobs that do not provide these types of benefits for their employees. Most HMOs such as Kaiser Permanente do not admit uninsured patients because the company will not be reimbursed for its medical services by any insurance group. Thus, these patients are left with untreated medical conditions which are only exacerbated by a lack of professional care. However, there is a way in the system in which our uninsured population may receive care. They go to emergency rooms of county hospitals. In these overcrowded and busy areas, uninsured patients can go and receive treatment, no questions asked. The result is that the county hospital absorbs all medical costs to treat these patients. In the past years, many county hospitals in Los Angeles have closed down due to seeing too many patients, and not receiving any pay back. With this last possible means for uninsured people to receive care gone, they are once again left to their own devices when it comes to seeking treatment for illnesses.
Emergency rooms closing down across the country clearly illustrates the problem the United States faces in dealing with the distribution of health care to the uninsured population. As we can witness in other areas of society, those in power will continually seek more power. In America, this power many times manifests itself in the form of money. Large corporations will not help those in need if there is nothing to gain from it. That is why it is up to us, America’s next generation of leaders to take a stand and fight for what is just and for what this nation stands for. It is hard for us, as a relatively privileged and closed-off group of people to understand the gravity of this issue. But can you imagine being the parent of a little girl who is being denied a CAT scan to check for a brain tumor, because your wages from working the graveyard shift as a janitor at a private university cannot pay for this crucial service? Imagine being the kindly nurse behind the reception desk at a hospital who has to tell a young man plagued by pneumonia that you cannot do anything for him today, maybe he should try somewhere else? This is not what living in the United States is about. Life will always be a struggle, but for people to have to struggle even to maintain health, the very element life is dependent on, is pathetic.
Universal health care is an idea that scares many, and if implemented would bring about change very slowly, as the entire medical system of this country must be revamped. With universal health care, every body would be granted at least some minimal standard of care. It becomes our moral duty to further our country in upholding “liberty and justice for all” by advocating positive change that will allow exactly that for all of its people. In the words of Henry David Thoreau, “under a government which imprisons any unjustly, the true place for a just man is also a prison” (Thoreau 355). We cannot sit idly on the sidelines when people are in need of our support. By remaining inactive, we ultimately condemn those in need and even ourselves to living in a world that slips farther and farther away from what our forefathers envisioned. We cannot simply wait for change to occur. Remember, often times the changes that need to be made are under the influence of those with power and money whose interests may differ vastly from those who would benefit from the change. If we wait for these parties to take action, we may as well go to the grave still waiting.
We must collectively, as a group find strength to help the uninsured people of our world who are as deserving of health care as the rest of us are. Look for doctors with private practices who are open to caring for the uninsured and make them your place of choice for receiving care, rather than large corporations. This way, you not only directly support an individual with similar interests as yourself, you also make a strong statement to the greater community, that all health care providers should follow such an example. Change often occurs on a small scale first, so write to your local policy makers about what an injustice it is to deny people of their right to health care. With enough volume of letters, your voice will be heard and perhaps inspire others. We owe it to ourselves, those around us, and our future generations to take a stand and right any injustices that still exist in our world. Fighting for health care for all is something I am passionate about and will make a part of my future. I hope I have motivated some of you to at least think about this issue, if not act upon it as well.

References:
Thoreau, Henry David. “Civil Disobedience.” 75 Reading Across the Curriculum. Chris Anson. New York: McGraw Hill, 2008. 345-366

1 comment:

jennifer said...

Jennifer Lee
August 9, 2007
EWRT !A
Final Essay
Abuse
Child abuse, animal abuse, drug abuse, emotional abuse, and neglect just about any kind of abuse relates towards torture. Now, the other day we had that debate on torture. Professor Maxwell told us to switch ideas, so the people that were for torture had to debate against torture while the other side had to argue for torture. So, what is the meaning of abuse? Is abuse right for this world; are you able to use abuse to get some answers? I believe that there should be a change in how the world is turning into, by changing the way of using abuse.
Child abuse is the worst thing that anyone can do to a child. According to kidshealth.org, any sort of family abuse can and will affect anyone. Does not depend on what religion, gender, or even race, family violence will affect others around you. In addition, kidsheath.org says that male children are beaten more than female, and more often than the female children. Why is that? Moreover, have you ever watched your parents get into a fight? It is not a very pleasant sight and it is too hard for you to handle. Child abuse can equal to any other kind of abuse, since those other abuses could be worked on other children.
Sexual child abuse is just about any sexual contact with an adult or a younger child or an older child. There are many stories in the news, with headlines like “Child at age 12 confesses her long 5 years of sexual abuse” and as you read the article, the person that abused the child was a family member, and that is called an incest. These kinds of abuses should be reported, and there should be something done. When you see some other child being sexually abused, you should not just stand there and act like nothing is wrong, do something! Sexual abuse can lead to emotional abuse, which could totally change a child’s point of view of everything in this world. Sexual abuse, you could find out who was abusing the child, and fix up the issue, but emotional abuse is the most difficult kind of abuse that you will have to fix up. Usually, for emotional abuse, the child does not have any signs of being abused, but you could get a slight indication that they are being abused. Because, the child’s emotions will be all over the place, so obviously, you will be indicated. Emotional abuse usually happens when there is a lot of yelling involved, or when family members are threatening the child, or yelling, plus the child’s self-esteem and feelings will be hurt. Physical abuse can show scars, burns and even cuts, but emotional abuse just shows emotional damage, but there are scars, burns, and cuts on their hearts, and their minds.
Physical abuse, this abuse is obviously shown out to the world. By using physical abuse, you could hit others, beat others, shake others, choke, bite, throw, and even whipping others. These actions are shown on the abused person, and there will definitely leave a mark and will cause more physical pain. I would like to talk about neglect. What is neglect? Well actually, neglect is the hardest type of abuse to figure out. When a child doesn’t get enough food, care, clothes, medical care, and even a guardian to look over them, this is when neglect occurs. There are emotional neglects which is when a parent doesn’t provide the child enough support or love and just doesn’t pay any attention on the child. This sort of emotional neglect isn’t when a parent doesn’t give their child a new computer or a new room, it’s different.
And of course, abuse does NOT happen only in families. One of the man places where children get abused is at school, or the way to and back from school. Older kids picking on younger kids, are just typical. Bullying is another form of abusing. When you bully someone, you will be threatening them, making fun of them, and even picking and teasing them, even though you’re not all that great, after all, you are picking on someone younger than you. The hardest thing about abuse is, to recognizing that you are being abused. If you father at home constantly hits you, you won’t consider that as abuse, but more a discipline. Plus, if you grow up like that, you will treat your kids that way, since you were grown up that way.
Why do people abuse others? Well, if you grew up in an abusive family, you will do that outside the house, and maybe there is a problem going on at home, so you just abuse others to forget that feeling. One main reason why parents abuse their children is from drug use. Plus, when you’re drunk, you can’t really control your feelings and actions.
Abuse can be corrected and there is always a way to stop the abuser and being abused. Well, all families have arguments, plus, it’s rare to find a family that doesn’t fight at all. Teens these days, and children have a hard time eating, sleeping and even going to school, because they are being abused. To end all of this abuse, children will do anything to get away from the abuse, and I read a lot of articles of children trying to commit suicide to get away from their troubles. Would you like to see that everyday? Children smoking, children doing stuff that they shouldn’t be doing, plus if they get sent home, they will just be tortured even more. Children need to concentrate, but they will have hard times trying to concentrate will all of the stress they are receiving from others. I really want this abuse situation to be changed, and now that you understand what the different causes and effects of abuse are, it’s time to step out to the world, and get something done, before it’s too late.



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